westlife18
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Post by westlife18 on Sept 9, 2008 8:40:24 GMT -5
I mailed you back hun. Maybe when my story is all finished up and I know that I won't touch it again and mess with it lol Then maybe you can have a look.
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Post by coco4shane on Sept 9, 2008 8:42:16 GMT -5
Wow thanks...LOL
But from a writers point of view you will always want to touch..that's why getting it betaed and posted is the best you can do for the story's sake... ;D
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westlife18
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Post by westlife18 on Sept 9, 2008 8:45:21 GMT -5
Right so starting now, from what you read that started this post. I want to know what you think of it HONESTLY and tell me why?? Give me a load of points and how could I make it better. Please
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Post by coco4shane on Sept 9, 2008 8:47:58 GMT -5
I would do that with pleasure but I will not do it on the boards. I will mail you...is that ok?
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westlife18
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Post by westlife18 on Sept 9, 2008 8:48:59 GMT -5
Yeah go ahead and be truly honest ok. A writer will always take critism.
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Post by coco4shane on Sept 9, 2008 8:56:32 GMT -5
Yip that I know..And believe me I'm always truly honest...
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westlife18
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Post by westlife18 on Sept 9, 2008 9:02:33 GMT -5
When you mailing me hun, I'm waiting lol
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Post by coco4shane on Sept 9, 2008 9:12:46 GMT -5
I mailed you..and remember that's only my opinion.. I'm almost done at work for the day..its like 16h20 here on my side. What's the time on your side? I'm on the boards normally between 8 am and 16h30. If you want to chat again. Or drop me a mail. Enjoy the eve *hugs* Nix ;D
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Post by Suze on Sept 9, 2008 10:43:29 GMT -5
westlife18, I have emailed you too, hope you find it helpful Always glad to help anyone with their writing.
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Post by *Sexy Feehily* on Sept 9, 2008 11:58:43 GMT -5
I loves a good fan fic
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